August 17, 2003

  • ~Daily story~


    Love you enough to kill


     
    Chapter 12

    ~*~


      "Hello? Elise? Look, I'm sorry about today."
     
    ¡§Keep your sorries. I don¡¦t want them.¡¨

     
    ¡§Can¡¦t we talk this over?¡¨

      
    ¡§There¡¦s nothing left to say.¡¨

     
    ¡§Please forgive me,¡¨ begged Amanda. ¡§I¡¦m really sorry. I shouldn¡¦t have accused you that way.¡¨

     
    I was still angry with her for what she said and I didn¡¦t really want to forgive her but instead I said, ¡§Why don¡¦t we meet at the pier.¡¨

     
    ¡§Really? Yes. Sure. What time?¡¨ asked Amanda excitedly.

     
    ¡§How about ten?¡¨

     
    ¡§Okay. Should I ask Tina to come?¡¨

     
    ¡§No, this is between you and me,¡¨ I said.

     
    ¡§Okay then,¡¨ she said uneasily. ¡§See you later.¡¨

     
    So thirty minutes before ten, I went out to the garden where the rose bushes were and dug out the drill. But then I remembered that it needed to be plugged in before you could use it, so I buried put inside the ground. How stupid of me?!

     
    I went back inside, trying to find anything that I could use to kill Amanda. Look at me, I was just going to throw away all those years of friendship but I was too angry to put off what I wanted to do. After a while, I gave up trying to look for a weapon, so instead I got dressed, went to the garage, got inside the car and drove to the beach. 

     
    The drive took twenty minutes and when I got there I almost tripped over something on the sand------fishing line. I picked it up. It was just enough to wrap around someone¡¦s neck two times. I smiled wickedly. Then I suddenly heard someone calling me from the pier. It was Amanda. So I walked over to see her.

     
    ¡§Hey, Elise. I¡¦m so glad that you decided to come.¡¨

     
    ¡§Yeah, me too. Why don¡¦t we walk along the pier?¡¨

     
    ¡§Sure.¡¨

     
    So we started walking on the pier. I could see that Amanda was really sorry for what she did, because her eyes were all red and puffy but I wasn¡¦t going to forgive her that easily.

     
    ¡§Elise, are you still angry with me?¡¨

     
    ¡§Not really,¡¨ I lied.

     
    ¡§Because I¡¦m really sorry,¡¨ she said. ¡§I really didn¡¦t mean those things I said.¡¨

     
    ¡§It¡¦s okay. Just forget about it,¡¨ I said. I was beginning to get angry again.

     
    ¡§Okay then. Friends?¡¨

     
    ¡§Forever.¡¨

     
    We both smiled and hugged each other. By now we were at the end of the pier, there was a cool breeze and we both stopped to enjoy it in silence. Then I looked at Amanda from the corner of my eye, I looked at her I remembered all those years of friendship, then I imagined what I was going to do to her tonight. It was horrible but I had to. So I slowly took the fishing wire out of my jacket and silently pounced on Amanda and tugged tightly on the wire that was wrapped around her neck. She yelled and we struggled for a while, making a lot of noise but no one was on the beach so no one saw or heard us.

     
    ¡§Elise! What are you doing?!¡¨ she said. ¡§Let me go.¡¨

     
    She was trying to pull the wire away but I just pulled it back even tighter.

     
    ¡§You think I¡¦m the killer, don¡¦t you?!¡¨ I asked. ¡§Well I¡¦m going to show you that I AM THE KILLER.¡¨

     
    ¡§So it is you!¡¨

     
    ¡§Oh. You didn¡¦t know it was me? I thought you did,¡¨ I said sarcastically.

     
    ¡§Please. Let me go¡K,¡¨ begged Amanda in tears. ¡§I¡¦m sorry¡K¡¨

     
    ¡§I don¡¦t want your sorry!¡¨ I snapped, and those were the last words I said to her because almost suddenly she dropped dead. I let go of her and she fell backwards. I wanted to take the wire away but it had sunk deep into the skin and blood was coming out, so I left it alone. Then I pulled her down to the shore and dumped her on the sand. There were a few waves but it wasn¡¦t enough to wash somebody away, so I just left her on the sand. I turned around and smiled at myself, but my smile quickly faded because I thought I saw someone up on the pier------it looked like Tina. But I could be wrong it was really dark. So I went home after that, then went upstairs to my room and during this whole time it felt like I was being watched¡K


    ~Today's Pic~


      the quality isnt that good enought...


    ~Daily life~


    today~ Rainning Day... ummmm no much to say. just woke up, i'll edit it later if anything intresting.....  ciao

Comments (5)

  • woo woo! first to props again! a big one for ya buddy!!

    that was a good story...but i think she's really cruel, 10 years+ frienship and she's gonna end it like that? wow now i know how scary a girl can be when she's really really angry...hehehe take care loh 881

  • wow that story is really interesting hahah....i wanna knoe what happens now. anyways....do your parents live in a diff country and you came over here to go to school or somethin? you must be hecka brave to do that..and your english is good too....i like your picssss. heheheh well thanks for your comment about my mom. i try to do what she wants but she always wants more!!! u probably knoe what im talking about. ok well i dont have msn messenger but i have aol messenger...u should get that if u dont have it! ok bye!

  • brrr.... wat a story... o, whos the guy that u like?! are u gonna show me one day?<3 luv ya

  • i can tell u love taking picz!lol nice site!2propz,meli

  • um..in order to put emoticon on your page u need to go to Look and feel on your private page.
    then go to the bottom..and..
    u need to copy and paste the script on the "WEBSITE STATS"          then it will work..
    ok..bbai.

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